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Xerxes Break Admin of Pandora
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| Subject: fushigi yugi remake Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:38 pm | |
| well thought i'd do a fanfic on this but i'm starting from where they all entered genbu chapter will be up soon | |
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Xerxes Break Admin of Pandora
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Sun Jan 30, 2011 7:17 pm | |
| chapter 1
Confession at the bar
Nuriko sneaks up behind Tamahome knocking him over with one hit.
Nuriko: I barely touched you and.................
Tamahome: what’s barely to you is a full blown hit
Nuriko: is there something bothering you, Miaka is worried about you after you walked off like that, where very close to getting the shentsopao, but if you’re not careful somebody will steel Miaka away
Tamahome: you really think so, like who?
Tamahome drinks his beer
Nuriko: well for example me
Tamahome spits his drink out almost chocking
Not far Miaka listens on the conversation
Miaka: I know Nuriko wanted me to stay upstairs but it only made me more curious
Tamahome laughs at Nuriko
Tamahome: you huh? I thought you loved Hotohori (laughs more)
Nuriko: that was my female self, funny isn't it how a haircut can make you feel like a totally different person! Today I was willing to risk my life for Miaka that was enough to make me wonder what kind of man I could be and the first time it dawned on me that as a man I probably always loved Miaka
Miaka: Nuriko that must have been the thing you won't tell me
(Flash back)
Nuriko: you wanna know
Miaka: Yeah!
Nuriko: ah but I can't say
(End of flash back)
Miaka: Nuriko (goes back upstairs in case anyone catches her)
Next day
Nuriko: ok I’ll go to Black Mountain I want you and Miaka to search for the others
Tamahome: no I’ll go you stay with Miaka (gets on a horse)
Miaka: be careful Tamahome
Tamahome: don't worry about me I’ll be fine I promise (goes off to Black Mountain)
Nuriko: honestly that man is stubborn let’s go and do as he said Miaka
Miaka: ok (turns to watch Tamahome go further away into the mountains
To be continued
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Mandy Chan Pandora Mod
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:08 pm | |
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Xerxes Break Admin of Pandora
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:43 pm | |
| :p in stead of nuriko going to the mountain tamahome is going :3 some of the words in the chapter i got from the manga through i did my best to write it in my own words | |
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Mandy Chan Pandora Mod
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:47 pm | |
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Xerxes Break Admin of Pandora
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:33 pm | |
| Chapter 2
goodbye my first love
Miaka: hey Nuriko is it me or is Tamahome acting weird why would he just go off like that
Nuriko: yeah I tried to talk to him last night but he won't tell me all we can do is just wait till he's ready to spit it out right
(Miaka flash back)
Nuriko: as a man I probably always loved Miaka (to Tamahome)
(End of flash back)
Nuriko: hey Miaka are you listening
Miaka: uh what, yeah I heard I was just thinking that’s all
At black mountain
Tamahome: finally made it. I wonder was it true what Yui said about me being a character in a book, never mind I can't let it get to me I have a job to do.
Tamahome goes over to the rock
Tamahome: looks like is a job for Nuriko I better head back
Tamahome turns around to face Ashitare
Ashitare: must kill suzaku warrior
Tamahome: you must be one of them a seiryu warrior. Just so you know I won't go easy on you
Tamahome and Ashitare start their fight
Back in the market
Miaka: Nuriko we have to go to Black Mountain now something doesn't feel right
Nuriko: I agree I felt something weird ------------------------------------- Tasuki: what was that I felt, what’s going on!
Mitsukake feels worried about the feeling he felt like Tasuki ------------------------------------------------ Chiriko: did you feel that Chichiri?
Chichiri: something has happened to one of us you know!
At Black Mountain Ashitare stabs Tamahome in the chest with his claws
Tamahome: not good............
Tamahome manages to free himself from Ashitare and punches him real hard making Ashitare lose his head.
Tamahome: how am I going..... To marry Miaka now......... (Falls to the ground imagining himself being married to Miaka)
Nuriko and Miaka run up to Tamahome, Nuriko holds Tamahome in his arms
Miaka: NOOO TAMAHOME YOU HAVE TO HANG IN THERE
Tamahome: sorry Miaka.... I tried to kill that thing..... But only got myself..... Badly hurt
Miaka: DON'T TALK MUCH TAMAHOME PLEASE HANG IN THERE TILL MITSKAKE GETS HERE
Nuriko: she's right try and not move much either
Miaka: (gets up) I'll start a fire wait here (runs to get some wood)
Tamahome: heh, looks like you can steel........... Miaka away from me now Nuriko
Nuriko: What are you saying!!!! You’re not leaving us now Tamahome, don't you see Miaka's heart is breaking seeing you like this!!!
Miaka comes back making a fire,
Tamahome: Nuriko please....... take care of Miaka for me
Nuriko: TAMAHOME PLEASE DON'T TALK TOO MUCH
Miaka: Nuriko watch Tamahome I’m going to see if I can find Mitsukake (starts to walk off best she can in the snow)
Nuriko sits holding Tamahome, also sensing that he just died in his arms
Nuriko: Tamahome, Tama....... (Starts to cry)
Miaka stops walking and freezes in one spot
Miaka: it has to be a joke right... he was just talking and smiling to us, you saw him right Nuriko!
Nuriko: (continues to cry) I’m sorry Miaka
Miaka: This.. Can’t be happening (falls to the snow) Tamahome!!!!!!!!!!! (Crawls over to Nuriko and looks over Tamahome) PLEASE OPEN YOUR EYES TAMAHOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Starts crying
To be continued
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Mandy Chan Pandora Mod
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:56 pm | |
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Xerxes Break Admin of Pandora
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:58 pm | |
| up in fic anyways i had him die in nurikos place | |
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Mandy Chan Pandora Mod
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:00 pm | |
| I seen: D But yay Nuriko is ok | |
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Xerxes Break Admin of Pandora
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Mon Dec 19, 2011 9:42 pm | |
| ok decided to continue this fanfic ^^ | |
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Xerxes Break Admin of Pandora
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:01 pm | |
| Saying Good Bye
As all the other Suzaku Warriors make to the mountian Miaka refuses to move from the tree crying her heart out.
Chichiri takes his mask off going ocver to Nuriko
Chichiri: where too late airn't we
Nuriko holds back on crying and nods his head not able to talk with the shock
Mitsukake goes over kneeling in the snow and heals Tamahomes wounds
Mitsukake: This is all i can do for Tamahome at least this way we can send him off in one piece
Tasuki starts laughing
Tasuki: What a joke. Tama must be faking it, why would he just up and die like that when he has Miaka to live for
Everyone remains sliant
Tasuki: (Shakes Tammahome) COME ON MAN OPEN YOUR EYES!!!!, MIAKA, YOU HAVE TO THINK ABOUT MIAKA'S FEELINGS
Nuriko: WILL YOU JUST STOP IT TASUKI, WE'VE LOST TAMA
Nuriko hold Tasuki back while crying
Tasuki: HOW COULD YOU TAMA, WHY, WHY!!!!!!
Tasuki starts crying
Chiriko: shouldn't we see to Miaka so she can say her last good byes to Tamahome
Chirko wipes tears from his eyes
Nuriko: I guess i'll go and get her
Nuriko wipes his tears and goes off to get Miaka. Miaka is still sitting by the tree. still not wanting to move, all she wanted was to just freeze to death so she could be with Tamahome again. Nuriko goes up to Miaka and brings her into a hug
Nuriko: Am sorry Miaka. but we have to send Tamahome off now
Miaka: No
Nuriko: Eh!!
Miaka: I want to join Tamahome first
Nuriko: DON'T SAY THAT!!!!
Miaka: Nuriko
Nuriko: look i know it's hard to lose some you love but i think Tamahome would really like to see you smile and to continue your life, it took me awhile to move on after loseing Kourin and Byakuren
Miaka: Byakuren?
Nuriko: she was my rivel and she died saving me her last words to me was i love you. but i saw her more like a sister she just reminded me of my little sister kourin. they were also the same age a year younger then me.
Miaka: Nuriko i never knew you had such a rough past
Nuriko: Actually Byakuren died on this same mountian
Nuriko's eyes fill with tears again but he wipes his tears away
Nuriko: away thats why you have to keep living Miaka, so will you say your last good byes before we go into the cave
Miaka nods her head but cries in Nuyriko's arms at the same time
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Mandy Chan Pandora Mod
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| Subject: Re: fushigi yugi remake Fri Dec 23, 2011 5:10 pm | |
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