A Tragedy in Amusement Park?!!

Chapter I

In a bright sunny day, Oz co goes to an amusement park near the Pandora.
"Whoa, is this the current place?" Says Oz.
"I heard you can eat all meat only with 1000 yen!" Alice is so excited with her drool comes out.
"Eew! That gross...." Gilbert far away for three steps
"Since we here, let's go!" Uncle Oscar pull Oz, Gil and Alice to go in there.
*in the amusement park*
"Oz-sama! We've been waiting for you!" Sharon smiles.
"Yup! We already bored enough for only eating sweets..." Once again, Break want to show his best smiles, but it end badly.
"Oh, thanks for waiting... By the way, why are you call us so suddenly?" Ask Oz.
"Hmmm, let's talk later, 'kay?" Break smiles.
"Huh? But-"
"Since we here, why don't we look around? It's a nice pleace to have an afternoon tea actually" Sharon smiles so beautifully.
"Ugh.... I want to eat meat........ I'm starving enough" Alice grabs Oz hand.
"Ooooh, so Alice-kun is searching for meat......khukhukhu....." Break grind.
"Wha-?!! Where do you hide my meat?!!" Alice is angry and about to transform into B-Rabbit.
SLAP!!!
"Stop joking Break." Sharon still smiles, while Break was good enough to die and Alice shivering.
"Hahaha, come on Alice! Let's go to buy meat!" Oz grabs Alice hand.
"Wait Oz!" Gilbert are chasing Oz and Alice.
"Oh, my.... It's adolesence......." Uncle Oscar see them happily goes to the butcher.
"Whoa!! There are soooo many delicious looking meat here!!" Alice drool again.
"Stop that stupid rabbit... That's disgusting"
WHACK!!!
*Alice kicked Gilbert, but he dodge it*
"What do you call me before? Seaweed Head?"
"What? Do you want a fight? Then let-"
SLAP!!
"Cut it out, both of you.... Fight in a store is dangerous" Oz smiles when he punch Gil.
"Y, yes...." Then Gibert lost conciouness.
"Hey, Oz!!! That meat is very delicious looking meat!!!!! Can I eat it?!!"
"Of, course... But promise to me to not make any noise, 'kay?" Oz smiles
*Alice is already eat ALL THE MEAT in the shop*
"Yup, it's all xxxxx yen mister" Say the -suspicious looking- shop owner.
"Huh? What? Are you talking to me? Where's Oz?" Gibert look around.
"Oz? Aaah, if you laking about that blonde hair boy and black hair miss, they already left. That blonde hair boy said 'let that fainted mister pay all she ate' or something like that" Explain the suspicious looking shop owner.
"Wha-"
"Now this is the bill"
*Gilbert is looking at the bill*
"..................................Oz............you are too evil....."
*Gilbert fainted*

To be Continued

Nice fanfic I love the scenarios ~ And Gilbert, you can't get away from paying that humongous bill by just fainting XD Good luck ~

P/S: Lady Sharon, check your PM if you haven't already :p

Oh, yes!!! Thanks for the spirit!!!
But I don't very like being called Lay Sharon
Just call me Miss Sharon That's not too formal

I have a bad habit of talking formally, haha XD Ok, Miss Sharon from now on.

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P/S: Congrats!! Nice banner you've got there :)

yup!! Gizele12 REALLY did such a VERY GOOD WORK!!

Haha, we've got a lot to thank Gizele for
And Miss Sharon, good job with the fic. I'm looking forward for more ^^

Lol!! This is an awsome story Miss Sharon ^^

Thank you!!!!!!
First, i always thought my fanfiction more to be laughable than be praised

You'll do fine In the throwing game, you did come up with a nice idea as well XD Poor Reim-san ~ Maybe you can elaborate on that and write another fanfiction!

Okay, i'll try it

Chapter II

"Shit, where did that stupid rabbit go? She must pay for this" Gilbert is looking at his wallet (that probably empty right now)
"Oz, too....... Geez, where did they go?"
"Are you looking for someone, mister?"
*Gilbert turns back*
"Ummm......Yes........Who are you?" Ask Gilbert to the beautiful pink haired lady in front of him
"My name is Charlotte. You may call me Lotti. Anyway, are you looking for someone?" Ask Lotti
"Yes. A blonde haired boy and a black haired girl. They about this tall." Explain Gilbert
"Oooh, I'll try searching for them, then.... You don't have to pay me. It's all my duty as employee here" Lotti smiles beautifully
"Oh, yeah?!! Thanks!!!! I'll see you later then!!!" Gilbert run away
"Don't know where his master is............... Such an useless servant" Lotti smiles mysteriously.

*At the cafe*

"BREAK!!!! Have you seen Oz???!!!!!" Gilbert pant
"Oh, my.... What's wrong? Did you get lost??" Break start to tease Gilbert again
"No!!!!!"
"Lost sight of your master, didn't know where he is........ What do you call it then?" Break grind
"Eh? Ummmm.......that's a......urrrrgh..........it's a bit hard to say" Gilbert thinks seriously
"Then, why don't you try for searching him in a place maybe he would went?" Suggest Sharon
"Eh? Place that he maybe went? Hmmmmmm........" Gilbert think hard of it
"Maybe a Jet Coaster?? Or a petshop?" Says Uncle Oscar
"Okay, then! Here I go Oz!!!" Gilbert enthusiasm
"Be careful~" Says Break, Sharon, and Uncle Oscar

Sorry if the second chapter are too short
Next time I'll make it longer

Hoho, it's ok isn't it? The scenarios in the 2nd chapter really open up to loads of interesting possiblilities :p Looking forward to how you will develop those ideas

It's not the length that counts, it's the quality, and you certainly have a good quality story going ^^
I can't wait for the next chapter

Mhmmm, thanks for read it!!

Chapter III

"I know, Oz and that stupid rabbit must have wandered into a crowded place, but.......... NOT THIS KIND OF PLACE!!!!!!!!!!!"

-flashback-
"Okay, then! Here I go Oz!!!" Gilbert enthusiasm
"Be careful~" Says Break, Sharon, and Uncle Oscar



"Oz, might be in a crowded place like this, but......... Should I go to the Jet Coaster first?"
*Gilbert walks to the Jet Coaster*
"Whoa, it's very huge..... I wonder if Oz is there...."
*behind Gilbert's back, two girls are STARING at him, but he didn't notice*
"Huh?? Why do I feel chilly? This isn't winter?" Gilbert was confused.
"Hey, that man is sooooo cool!!!" Said the pink-dress girl who was staring at Gilbert.
"Where? Huh? Have I met that man before? Looks like I know him." Said the blond girl
"Staring at him isn't enough for me.... Then, let's pick up on him!!"
"Are you serious?? We look much younger than him.... Well, we can do that if we are older than him...." The blond girl didn't agree.
"That's doesen't matter!! We can do it!!" The pink-dress girl seemed to be optimistic.
"Huh? Wait a second!!!"
"What? I'm gonna chase after my love~"
"We can't be that optimistic, we should learn about his characteristic before we pick on him..." The blond girl suggest.
"Hmm, okay...... So, you mean, we should stalk him?" The pink dress girl looked happy.
"Huh? No, I-I mean...."
"This is settled then!!! We should stalk that man in black!!!" The pink-dress girl yelled.
*Gilbert was shock*
"What is that? Was someone yelling something over there?" Gilbert seemed worried.
"Oh,this is lame... I should smoke...."
*Gilbert put his cigarette in his mouth*
"OH MY GOD!!!!!! HE LOOKS SO HANDSOME WHEN HE PUT HIS CIGARETTE ON HIS MOUTH!!" The pink dress girl yelled.
"Shut up!!! He can hear us!!" The blond girl covered her friend's mouth.
"Oh, sorry...."
"Anyway, why am I involved in this? I better go home than stalk him like this..." Complained the blond girl.
"Just, come on.... I'm begging you Ada!!"
"But-"
CRASH!!!!
*The blonde girl bumped into a long blond-haired guy who had mismatched golden eye and wine red eye. He was carrying a drink and as a result, the drink spilled on his clothes*
"Ah!! I'm so sorry!!! Mister, are you alright??!!!!" The blonde girl are worried.
"I'm alright.... More importantly miss, did you get hurt somewhere?"
"Eh? I'm okay..... But-"
"It's more important your safer than me, miss...." The blonde guy are smiles.
"I'm sorry!!! I'm so sorry!!! I'm really careless!!" The blonde girl are aplogize.
"No, it's really alright. I'll just need to go change my clothes... More importantly, miss.... What's your name?" Ask that blonde guy.
"Huh? Ada Vessalius....."
"I see... My name is Vincent Nightray... Hopefully, we can meet again, miss Ada" Vincent smiles.
"Uh, yes..... Master Vincent...." Ada smiles too, but a little confused.


"What was that voice?" Gibert turn back.
"Why am I suddenly get this weird feeling? I have to go!" Gilbert run away


"Ada.... You know..... That man you bumped.... IS MORE HANDSOME THAN THAT MAN IN BLACK!! Aaaah, what should I do~" The pink dresses girl are dance happily.
"He seems nice.......... Huh? what's this? A handkechief?" Ada confused.
"That must be his handkerchief!! This is God's instruction!!! You've been fated to be with that guy!! Oh, I better get going!! My mum's are cooking pancake tonight! Bye!!"
"Huh? Wait!! Geez she doesen't listen to me...." Ada sigh.
"Anyway, I must give this handkerchief back......"


“Oh, my.... I ran after that voice, but I got lost............” Gilbert sigh.
“...................Why this day is so bad for me..... Getting lost of my own master, being tesed by Break................ AM I FATED AS A BAD LUCK MAN FROM BEGINNING???!!!!!!!” Gilbert yelled.
“Whoa, whoa..... Don’t get so stressed searching them , Gilbert-kun.”
*Gilbert turn back*
“Break!!! Have you seen Oz?!!” Gilbert asked Break
“Nope~”
“Don’t joking around Break......”
“Eh? It’s true.....” Break are trying to act innocent.
“Well, what’s the proof?” Gilbert lifted his left eyebrow.
“It’s true, Gilbert-san.... We’ve been trying to search for them.” Say Sharon.
“Have you search them everywhere?”
“Actually........ No. We haven’t search them in the Jet Coaster, Petshop, Restaurant, etc.” Explain Break.
“As I thought.” Gibert seems angry, but trying to not throwing his tantrum.
“Well, don’t worry.... There’s still has a time...” Says Sharon without any hesistant.
“Sharon....... How can you feel so calm about this?” Gilbert sigh.
“Umm, maybe it’s because the Green Tea I drank in the Cafe before....” Sharon smile innocently.
“It’s not that...... Anyway, let’s go to the petshop.”


*Back to the first line above*
*Right now, Gilbert, Break, and Sharon are in the petshop searching for Oz. But Gilbert easily get stoned because there are MANY cats around his legs*
“Oh, no.............ca........ca.......cat......they are too many of them....... I...I” Gilbert fainted

To be Continued

This is an awsome story Miss Sharon! Poor Gil XD

Haha, but still.......
There are so many wrong spelling and grammar
I'm not very good at English

You'll improve so don't worry too much! Sorry if I sounded like I was reprimanding you
You'll definitely get better! Practice makes perfect!!!

Thank you!!
I'll do my best!!!!!

Yeah!!! I'm already fix it!!

Yay! Good job, Sharon-chan!!! Ganbatte ne? ~

@Leo: What is that Kanji words means? I can't read kanji well (even hiragana/katakana)

Oh you mean the one in my signature?
It's "Anata wa ima doko de nani wo shite imasu ka? Kono sora no tsuzuku basho ni imasu ka?"
They're the first 2 lines of the song "You ~ Visionen im Spiegel" from Higurashi no Naku Koro ni.
The song has many versions but this one is the one that I always listen to: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9FKGwkj0YFw

Oh nice! Yeah i could read the first line >w< Thanks for the romaji Leo!